Criticism is not easy; but as writers -especially new writers- it is a necessary evil. "Industrial Scripts" will tell you things as they are. When I got my report, I must admit, initially I was a little bit depressed. I didn't want to admit that there were so many things I got wrong. However it is important to know the truth, if you want to progress in this industry. The result of feedback I got from "Industrial Scripts" was a second draft that even I thought was better than the first. I have since entered several competitions with the second draft and I feel more optimistic about my script. There is one criticism I would like to mention though. Dear "Industrial Scripts", please emphasise a little bit more the positive points of our scripts. Maybe the report should finish with the positives. The report should make us feel a bit more hopeful and optimistic.