A very thorough and well thought through report. Slightly let down by a little confused hedging on both sides of an argument. I also had a review of my previous script and maybe because that script was in a worse state - I received more immediately useful, specific notes to help me improve it so even though it annoyed me at the time how much the guy hated it, it massively helped the script. The only criticism of that report was there were a couple of factual errors as to the content of the script but I just took that as indirect advice that my next draft had to be really, really clear. Industrial scripts gives the best reports I've seen yet as an amateur writer and I will use them again.