This was a very useful and full report. The criticisms were justified with clear reasons, most of which I would have to agree with as being points where I felt uneasy when reading this (first) draft. There was also quite a lyrical interpretation of the theme of the story which I found quite moving as well some intriguing suggestions as to the further development of the script. The analysis of the script's marketability was detailed and in line with my expectations when writing. It was reassuring to know that the reader and I were in agreement on the kind of the audience the script was aimed at. My criticism of the report. I felt that the a closer reading of the dialogue might have answered some of the questions raised by the reader. On the whole though it was worth the money, and I'd recommend this service to any screenwriter who wants a realistic, industry standard appraisal of their work.