This is the second script I've used Industrial Scripts for. Both times I got accepted into the talent connector program. When I submitted for talent connector the first time around, I didn't receive any enquiries, so I don't have any expectations that this time will be any different. The first script and subsequent lots of feedback seemed more practical, and, I guess, structural? - but this new script and its feedback is more character based, which I think says more about the fact that I now have a better understanding of structure/plot etc. All of that said, obviously I was impressed enough to use Industrial Scripts again (I used them maybe 3 times in total for that first script, which helped me reach the finalist stage for an international fellowship). I know all of this sounds a little negative, but honestly, Industrial Scripts is the best feedback service I've ever used (I've used probably 5 or 6)? I would use it more often if it wasn't so expensive (with the exchange rate in my part of the world). There you go- hope that review helps anyone trying to decide whether or not to use Industrial Scripts... if you've got the cash, and you want some professional feedback to progress your script to the next stage, I say, do it!