I enjoyed reading the review of the script I wrote. I find as a writer, you get stuck inside the story, and you need an objective outside view of the things you wrote. I've refrained from giving the review a full endorsement because I think there is a missing component that, as a writer, I would appreciate. I would like to see a comment or a grading on the mechanics of the work. For example, I did not get any feedback on the quality of the dialogue. I guess it would be helpful to have a separate overview similar to the rating I'm giving your review. All in all, it is worth the price to get feedback. I will get back to work on my script.