Many thanks for the report on my script. It was delivered ahead of time and had more pages than I expected. It had a lot of detail and a tremendous amount of advice to further the project. It's certainly given me food for thought and has inspired me to try harder to make it better. It's easy to be so close to your project that you don't always see the weaker areas and that's where a service like this is so invaluable. Having professionals read your script and give you honest advice, no matter how critical that may be, is infinitely better than friends or family who don't want to hurt your feelings. I was pleased that the reader got the characters the way I intended, though I will improve on the character descriptions as recommended. I like the idea of changing the midpoint. That's something I wouldn't have thought of at this stage but it works very well. I was very pleased with the fact the reader thought I handled ensemble work well and that the dialogue was generally good. Delighted with the comment that it was worthwhile continuing with a worthwhile piece of work. If it wasn't, I would rather know early, not waste more time on something that wasn't working. I like the fact that the reader was honest in any criticism - that is exactly what I want. I will take heed of the advice and wholeheartedly recommend Industrial Scripts to anyone wanting their script evaluated. I will definitely be back. (Apologies to Arnold)