Really pleased with the feedback on the script. I work professionally in the industry and work with scripts day to day but when it came to writing my own I was a little unsure as to whether I really *did* know how to achieve what I wanted to. The feedback was very constructive, highlighting areas of the script that could be made stronger and clearly correcting formatting errors with references given to outside resources where needed. Quite obviously written by someone who knows what they're talking about and with a genuinely supportive sensibility to the report. It feels like Industrial Scripts really do want to encourage and help new writing talent and the feedback came from a good place from someone who does know the craft and the industry inside out. Thank you very much, I look forward to using the service again.