Great to have feedback from someone who actually knows (and likes) the genre I have written in. All too often readers who have no liking for horror films (for example) are asked to review horror screenplays. It shouldn't make a difference if they like the genre or not but the fact is it does. And it colours any assessment. I'm glad to say this reviewer (pretty much) got what I was aiming for. Got the references and the target audience. I don't agree with everything he/she critiqued but it was well worth the money I paid and I value the feedback. It has been very useful. Thank you. BTW my review is for internal use ONLY and cannot be used for advertising purposes. :-)