This is the second "coverage" report I've requested, the first being a year ago. I was very pleased that the reader acknowledged the previous draft and therefore, was able to indicate where the script had improved...or not. Helpful, supportive and very conscientious. I'm also very pleased, as I was in the previous report, with the examples drawn from the script, illustrating either improvement or need for improvement. During my second read of the analysis (as I'm always in a state of paralysis on the first read!) the areas which need to be addressed were clear and made a great deal of sense. This time round, I'm pleased that the script achieved an "Honourable Mention". And, that there will be time for me to improve the existing script and, possibly, the rating. The project is my first attempt at screen writing, which is very apparent, but at all times, I've felt the reader to be professional, respectful and encouraging. Also, for the second time, the reader has provided more than the four pages allotted to the "coverage" service. I greatly appreciate this commitment to servicing the writer. To me, it indicates the reader's desire that the writer succeeds. And as the writer, that sincerity is a gift. I definitely recommend Industrial Scripts. I'm a huge fan of British television and film. That Industrial Scripts is a group of enthusiastic industry professionals well connected with those who make my favourite shows and films, well...can it get any better?