The feedback I received was detailed and helpful. The reader clearly had a good understanding of screenplay structure and conventions. It made me think about things I was reluctant to think about when I wrote the last draft. Very worthwhile feedback on this early draft. It is likely that I will resubmit a later draft. The first half of the report provided positive feedback, while the second commented on structural issues. Of course I would have liked more points of constructive criticism (i.e. where I could make changes), but it may be that there was not room in a report such as this or the reader thought it best to focus on one major structural issue. Overall, I thought the feedback was very good.