I was very impressed by the analysis report received on my screenplay. It arrived within 2 weeks. As my first ever screenplay I found this report invaluable. As it's a comedy I was relieved to hear it had made the report's author laugh and that he/she thought that it had promise and that I have an original voice. I already suspected that structure and story were my weak points, the comedy and the writing my stronger ones, but to have this reinforced by an expert has enabled me to concentrate on my weaker points and polish my work. It was clear that the person who analysed my screenplay had read it carefully and taken in every detail, and had not just skimmed over it, as they analysed so many events and characters in depth. I found the advice given on how to improve it absolutely invaluable and it has given me several ideas for changing the structure and ending for the better. In fact, soon after receiving the report I made a few changes, submitted it for a competition, and although I didn't win, I did get through to the top 10% which has spurred me on to make all those improvements you advised. Thank you so much. I would definitely recommend Industrial Scripts.