With my script, I always felt something was off, something I couldn't quite wrap my head around, and after sending it in to Industrial, it's as if I have been granted the gift of complete and total clarity. The reviewer pointed out all the things I had known was wrong, but didn't know how to go about fixing them. I was very pleased to see that the reader also didn't critique as much as I was expecting, as in, they had much more positive things to say about the material than negative, as in format, wording, and story. In the end, when I read the last page, I was invigorated with inspiration to start overhauling my work into the great piece that it could be, as the reviewer stated. The only problem I have is that I can't sit with them and talk about it! They brought up such good points and I wish I could've delved deeper with them. If I have any improvement advice, it would be that it seemed like the reader was a bit scrambled, jumping around the script. The last sixty or so pages (in the script) had barely any critique at all, mostly positive. Now, that could be a good thing on my part, but I was still a bit worried that MAYBE it wasn't read to it's full extent, but other than that, the feedback I was provided was more than enough for me to continue writing and honing my skill, based off said critique. Thank you so very much, and I look forward to using your services in the future.