Industrial scripts provided a detailed and accurate analysis of our screenplay in the time they promised which was less than 21 days. I was impressed with the scope of the comments and agree with many of the points made. Additionally the comments pointed out the weaknesses of the script, which I had overlooked. Whilst a few of the suggestions for improvement were somewhat unachievable in our chosen format, most of the suggestions and criticisms were very helpful. These comments helped outline necessary changes and shaped the next draft of the screenplay. Ultimately my writing partner and I are very happy that we submitted our script and pitch document for review by Industrial Scripts.