Industrial Scripts have provided two Project Analyses (Film Forensic Notes) of my feature screenplay. In each case I received 16 pages of in-depth guidance, encouragement and really helpful criticism, which have enabled me to revise and greatly improve my work. This process is still ongoing, as sometimes it takes a while to absorb their suggestions and for the solutions to come to me. I was really impressed both times by the attention to detail and the exciting changes to the plot which were mooted. It was also great to know that the comparable titles listed by the readers were in line with what I am striving for. In particular the second report was highly muscular and stimulating. One of the suggestions was for a sequel, which opened up possibilities to cut some of the current scenes and use them in the next screenplay. This will allow for changes which I hope will increase the pace of the middle section and create stronger dramatic unities overall. The first report came within the 21 days, the second one was a couple of days late but was accompanied by an apology and a free offer. I am thrilled with the Talent Connector Programme which has come up really quickly – I was expecting to wait for several months. All in all I am hugely satisfied with the service, which I can recommend as totally thorough, reliable and inspiring - good money, well spent.