The review was full of helpful constructive praise and criticism, which will both be very useful to me in my efforts to improve my script. The reader clearly understood what I was aiming for and had thought about what would help me achieve that. The positives where enthusiatically highlighted and the negatives, sensitively expressed - which was well handled for me and my 'new writers fragile ego'! I feel I now can see the clear path I need to take towards a more successful script and am now beavering away on the areas of weakness confident I can leave alone those aspects which already work well.