Dear Industrial Scripts Team, Please find my review below: i) Your report on my feature script, WASTED, arrived well ahead of the promised deadline. Great! ii) I really appreciate both its content and style. Your reader has a brilliant ability not only to pinpoint where the script's structure is weak (almost exactly along the lines that concerned me too) but why (beyond my ability!). As much as the analysis, I appreciate the report's detailed and imaginative suggestions about the sort of changes I could make to improve things. These demonstrate really caring reading and concern about what I want to say/do with my story - i.e. not with what the reader wants the script to say and do. That kind of professionalism helps give me a real confidence boost - even more than being selected for Industrial Scripts' Talent Connector Programme. (Though, of course, I am quite delighted about that too!) iii) I am also happy with the report's wider advice about WASTED's prospects in the marketplace. I will certainly be working along the lines you suggested in the five months before the script is added to your Talent Connector list. Hopefully my revisions will help add to the script's marketability. Certainly they will help me - as its creator - feel more satisfied. In short, very many thanks. I will certainly use your services again and recommend Industrial Scripts to those writer friends who haven't yet used them. Margaret