I sent this certain script to three different analysts throughout the screenwriting world just to see if they would 'get' the ending and the analyst from Industrial Scripts was the only one who understood exactly what I was aiming for. Not only was the analysis punctual but every point brought up was explained and made perfect sense. As writers we are too close to our material and the only way to make it better is to get a fresh set of eyes to peruse every word and the team at Industrial Scripts are well worth the money. So let's end with the screenwriters worst enemy - the cliche' - forget the rest and pay for the best. Now the fun starts. The rewrite. Thanks Industrial Scripts for making, not only myself a better writer, but for actually doing a decent job in a world that celebrates laziness and quick-fire fame seekers.