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Industrial Scripts - Screenplay Editors 5 star review on 18th March 2024

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Anonymous // 01/01/2019

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“7/10 You say the script is not set up as well as it could be. No hints as how to improve it. You say the pace in some sequences is less compelling. As in "Legionnaire", there have to be moments of quiet, to let the audience draw breath. Continuous Action can become risible. You say the characters goals are unclear. They need to get to Australia with the information like yesterday. You fail to give alternatives to leaving the boy behind at night, in thick jungle, where lights or calls would bring their enemies on them. Yes, analyses are subjective, but they need to be pertinent, rather than a means to avoiding giving a Consider. Some useful pointers, thanks.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Insightful, incisive, brutally honest coverage yet comforting to know where I stand and with great pointers in regards to possible courses of action regarding further drafts, I was very pleased and the report will hopefully prove an important marker on the journey -- not to mention that it arrived well in advance of the fourteen day turnaround which was very impressive given the level of detail. Industrial Scripts comes with my highest recommendation and I wish you every success with reports of your own.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“An outstanding set of notes, at a tricky point in this project's evolution. Thorough analysis backed up by countless specific page references, as well as creative yet respectful suggestions on how to improve the next draft. Industrial Scripts has a big reputation within the screenwriting world and on this evidence, it's wholly justified. We'll be returning, for sure.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Great analysis and report, very useful, though the report itself felt a little rushed in how it was written, and need some proofreading - spelling errors etc.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“The most useful script report I've ever bought! I sent the same script draft to multiple coverage agencies and this was by far the most useful. It wasn't sugar coated, but painfully truthful where it needed to be. But there was also praise where it was due and real, practical, scene-by-scene suggestions of how to improve the narrative structure.. It gave really useful and intelligent suggestions. I will be returning to this service.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“The report arrived in “no time” a couple of days after I sent the material, I was impressed! The analysis was well done overall, it focused on the main weaknesses, pointed out to some fragility about my supporting character that I didn’t think about. It made me deeply think, and reconsider what I thought about my character. I am not a fast writer, I have to think , and think it over and over, when I feel ready I go back to the script and make changes. I’m not sure if I’ll follow all the advice and the suggestions my consultant gave me, but I do appreciate to have a lot to think about. The report is detailed, and well written, it gave think and also gave me suggestions to make my supporting character as good as my main character. I loved the advice about avoiding cliché, and add tension and flaws to him. A couple of remarks disappointed me a little. 1) At a certain point the consultant writes that my characters take a trip to Tenerife (p. 7), My characters never took a trip to Tenerife, another character does, and it’s well explained. My characters go to a family country house. Tenerife is fashionable, it would have been incoherent to send my two characters to Tenerife. 2) The remarks on how we discover Elia’s parents died. I might disagree with the consultant, but for this special remark I really have to think it over. Could the consultant have read the script a little too fast? I didn’t require a fast reading, actually I put 21 days. I used consultants in the past that returned to me a report in a very short time, and I found the reports always very superficial. This is not the case with this report, writing a 9 page report is a great job, but I wondered if, with a little more time, the report would have been different. The consultant was very supportive, and encouraging. Position in the marketplace: As I was writing, I though the production of this movie could actually be affordable, low budget, and it was nice to read that my thoughts were right. The report was not blunt. I am satisfied about this consulting service, and plan to use it again in the future.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“I did have a couple of issues with my initial analysis which I raised with I S. I now await the results of my re-submit and I will be posting a review shortly. Industrial have been exceedingly understanding and helpful in this matter, for which I am very grateful ...”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Very satisfied. The service I bought was a treatment report, and my first treatment at that, so there were things which I thought I made clear but obviously had not. To any greenhorns like myself I'd recommend: in treatments, more is more! Remember the reader knows 0 about your story, and don't forget character descriptions :) Another point worth mentioning: the concept of "logline" here at IS seems to me closer to that of "premise". I could have made my logline less commercial and more detailed. The comments from the reader were very useful, both in showing me improvements that can be made and in reassuring me where I'm going in the right direction. There was a minor issue with the report - a sentence deleted only by half - but I contacted IS about it and they took the trouble to ask the reader and clarify it was only an editing mistake on his part. So the fifth star here goes to the customer service!”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Excellent insightful notes with some helpful suggestions for the next draft.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“I had a script doctor assessment done. I thought some of the comments were good, but I was expecting more of an assessment of the story structure and how it was working (or not)--such as the interaction of the subplots with the major plot, etc. What I received were comments about characterization. It was also suggested that I have 4 weeks of doctoring, and considering the few changes that were suggested, this seemed way over the amount of time it would take to address these.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Whilst knowing there was a lot wrong with my first draft and knowing the areas I needed to concentrate on, another pair of eyes to reaffirm and also pick up areas that needed more work was invaluable. This is about the 6th time I have used Industrial Scripts and once again I feel it is money well spent. So much to work on but at least I know what areas are my main focus.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Fantastic depth of thought and analysis. Extremely insightful. And delightfully brutal on the things, deep down, I know need fixing. Highly recommend!!”

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Posted 6 years ago

“The best feedback I’ve ever had! IS will definitely be my go to company for Script coverages from now on”

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Posted 6 years ago

“IS apologised for the slight delay as their consultants were swamped at the time of booking, but the report more than made up for the wait. Detailed, insightful and with plenty of helpful suggestions, I will certainly use the service again.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“I asked in the comment to review my language, as I am not an native speaker alas there was mot a comment on that at all. It seemed the reviewer haven't read all the script and the outline tthoroughly , as there was comment about no motive of the lead charcter "Michael" but the motive was of him acting on behalf of the russians. I ask you to review again.!”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Brutally honest but fair and constructive.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“first class and worth every penny. spot on, concrete analysis of the main faults. some detailed advice on fixing dialogue and a couple of other lesser problem areas. this is my second script I've sent in for analysis.the first time was very useful. But this was invaluable.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“Expert and precise analysis, as always. Great service!”

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Posted 6 years ago

“The review was delivered before time. Generally I thought the analysis was good and I agree with much (though not all) of it. There were a few errors in the synopsis, though not serious ones. The review was constructive and gave potential producers reasons for following it up. The verdict was clear.”

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Posted 6 years ago

“I've been using Industrial Scripts for years and will continue to do so!”

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Posted 6 years ago

Industrial Scripts - Screenplay Editors is rated 4.6 based on 716 reviews