Name: Industrial Scripts - Screenplay Editors
Rating: 4.64

“I sent this certain script to three different analysts throughout the screenwriting world just to see if they would 'get' the ending and the analyst from Industrial Scripts was the only one who understood exactly what I was aiming for. Not only was the analysis punctual but every point brought up was explained and made perfect sense. As writers we are too close to our material and the only way to make it better is to get a fresh set of eyes to peruse every word and the team at Industrial Scripts are well worth the money. So let's end with the screenwriters worst enemy - the cliche' - forget the rest and pay for the best. Now the fun starts. The rewrite. Thanks Industrial Scripts for making, not only myself a better writer, but for actually doing a decent job in a world that celebrates laziness and quick-fire fame seekers.”

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Posted 9 years ago

“I am extremely happy with this service and have used them four times already. The reader always manages to understand my intents with the script, making clear what is working and emphasizing that, while also being able to find where it falls short. I am given ideas on how to improve things, which is also fantastic. Highly recommended.”

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Posted 9 years ago

“I received very generous feedback in the Logline report and direction that exceeded my expectations and my knowledge of the industry. I will incorporate the information to direct my writing and use Industrial Scripts again.”

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Posted 9 years ago

“* My Experience of Industrial Scripts * I'd written a short-n-sweet review, but then I thought: You know what, let's really go the extra mile, like my wonderful Industrial Scripts reader clearly did, when she filed my report. This is a genuine review by the way. OK, so I have a highly attuned bulls**t radar. And there are various script reading services out there that smell fishy to me. But this one sounded legit. I didn't find I.S. straight away (that's Industrial Scripts, not Islamic State, BTW). It was only after researching/stalking an agent at Curtis Brown that I discovered he liked hearing about stuff through Industrial Scripts. So rather than schmooze his PA and receive the inevitable brush off, I thought I'd check them out. Because I'm hardcore, I opted for their "Dry Run Report" (I'm a copywriter by background, used to my work being shredded to pieces if it's not up to scratch, so I wanted a no-nonsense appraisal, rather than encouragement and general hand-holding). My reader was intelligent, savvy and impartial. I didn't agree with everything in the report (I'd expected it to be rated "Excellent" across the board, added to the Talent Connector, and for me to be cracking open bottles of Bollinger with Tim Bevan by now) but perhaps that just goes to show -- this is the real deal. They'll treat you like a serious screenwriter and if your work's not up to scratch, that's because you're not a serious screenwriter... well not yet, anyway. There was a slight administrative hiccup: I'd ordered over-the-weekend turnaround (you know, like where you hand over your hot spec script to your über agent by end-of-play Friday and a bidding war between the major studios ensues Monday morning). Well they said it was too close to Christmas, so they refunded the fast turnaround fee and delivered it within the default 21-day period instead. But I won't dock them a star for that, not the fact the Verdict was Pass and not Recommend. I'm satisfied that my script was thoroughly scrutinised by someone who knows their s**t, and not some churn-n-burn intern, wet behind the ears and wired out on Haribo Fangtastics. For that, Industrial Scripts, I salute you!”

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Posted 9 years ago

“I have to say I was a little dubious when purchasing a report from IS as it was my first time. I researched as much as i could about them and thought I would go for it. Having sent my payment I didn't get the emails they had said I would, the password they sent me didn't work for my account or for the submission of the script. I then found no help in the FAQ section so tried contacting them. Then things started to look up. An automatic email was returned to me with the correct submission details. I managed to reset my password so that I could access my account. I had also sent my script just before Christmas so was worried that the 21 days promised would not materialise, however, on the 21st day, just the other side of Christmas I received it. Then I was truly happy. The review was everything I wanted. It pointed out what I think I already new in most areas, but I had got to a point where I could not see a way forward. I now know what I need to progress it but with it being my first full screenplay it was more about the accomplishment for me. Thanks IS, I will definitely be back with more!”

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Posted 9 years ago

“Very professional, met my deadline, gave me exactly what I had wanted. I will use these guys again.”

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Posted 9 years ago

“The feedback was invaluable and incredibly helpful. I have been working on the project for a couple of years now and had reached the point of not knowing how else to improve it, but now I have a very clear picture of what works and what needs improving. I have already started working on the the new draft and am very excited about it. I definitely recommend Industrial Scripts to anyone who wants to work at a professional level.”

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Posted 9 years ago

“I have been impressesd with the course - very easy to follow and excellent foemat!”

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Posted 10 years ago

“Really, really impressed with this course. I've been dreaming in writing screenplays for years and with this course the dream is becoming a reality. Already, completed several loglines, a genre and plot analysis - and researched (and made contact with ) potential producers such as Marcus Wilson and Phil Collinson. Currently, working on index cards. A must for all beginning Screenwriters!”

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Posted 10 years ago

“Dear Industrial Scripts Team, Please find my review below: i) Your report on my feature script, WASTED, arrived well ahead of the promised deadline. Great! ii) I really appreciate both its content and style. Your reader has a brilliant ability not only to pinpoint where the script's structure is weak (almost exactly along the lines that concerned me too) but why (beyond my ability!). As much as the analysis, I appreciate the report's detailed and imaginative suggestions about the sort of changes I could make to improve things. These demonstrate really caring reading and concern about what I want to say/do with my story - i.e. not with what the reader wants the script to say and do. That kind of professionalism helps give me a real confidence boost - even more than being selected for Industrial Scripts' Talent Connector Programme. (Though, of course, I am quite delighted about that too!) iii) I am also happy with the report's wider advice about WASTED's prospects in the marketplace. I will certainly be working along the lines you suggested in the five months before the script is added to your Talent Connector list. Hopefully my revisions will help add to the script's marketability. Certainly they will help me - as its creator - feel more satisfied. In short, very many thanks. I will certainly use your services again and recommend Industrial Scripts to those writer friends who haven't yet used them. Margaret”

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Posted 10 years ago

“Dear Industrial Scripts Team, Please find my review below: i) Your report on my feature script, WASTED, arrived well ahead of the promised deadline. Great! ii) I really appreciate both its content and style. Your reader has a brilliant ability not only to pinpoint where the script's structure is weak (almost exactly along the lines that concerned me too) but why (beyond my ability!). As much as the analysis, I appreciate the report's detailed and imaginative suggestions about the sort of changes I could make to improve things. These demonstrate really caring reading and concern about what I want to say/do with my story - i.e. not with what the reader wants the script to say and do. That kind of professionalism helps give me a real confidence boost - even more than being selected for Industrial Scripts' Talent Connector Programme. (Though, of course, I am quite delighted about that too!) iii) I am also happy with the report's wider advice about WASTED's prospects in the marketplace. I will certainly be working along the lines you suggested in the five months before the script is added to your Talent Connector list. Hopefully my revisions will help add to the script's marketability. Certainly they will help me - as its creator - feel more satisfied. In short, very many thanks. I will certainly use your services again and recommend Industrial Scripts to those writer friends who haven't yet used them. Margaret”

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Posted 10 years ago

“Dear Industrial Scripts, Thank you very much for your report of my script. I was very pleased with the report which arrived very promptly and contained very useful feedback. The report gave useful feedback about the scripts potential in the market place, the overall concept and the characters journeys. Although I disagreed slightly with some of the comments regarding historical accuracy, the analyst offered a lot of useful criticism of the script and guidance of how to improve it further. Using Industrial Scripts has been a very positive experience that I feel will improve my script. Many thanks, Mariam Bell”

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Posted 10 years ago

“The report arrived promptly with many detailed and thoughtful insights. Would recommend to those who want an honest, objective critique of their project. The analysis provided will be a great benefit when working towards the next draft.”

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Posted 10 years ago

“I was extremely surprised by the quality of the report I have received. It was very well detailed, delivered ahead of time and all arguments, without exception, were relevant and very well explained. And more importantly - this report made me want to write a better script. It inspired me - still does.”

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Posted 10 years ago

“I received feedback from Industrial Scripts three weeks ago. On the plus side, it was evident that the reader had read the whole script which is at least something. Also, I received 8 pages of notes as opposed to 4. On the negative side, the review felt more like someone's opinion than true feedback and the reader steered me toward copying something that had been done before which felt wrong. I will use one or two comments, but for the hefty price tag, I must admit that I have received better (free!) notes from fellow writers so I would not recommend the service (or perhaps the reader?).”

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Posted 10 years ago

“I got exactly what I needed -- professional feedback. Family and friends just can't give you this kind of insight. Excellent value for money and a very fast turnaround.”

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Posted 10 years ago

“Incisive, re-write suggestions couldn't be bettered, fee was excellent value”

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Posted 10 years ago

“I am very pleased with the detailed report I received back on my script, Mother of Ghosts. Much of the analysis reflected my own thoughts and to have those pinpointed and confirmed by an industry expert has proved very useful. However, not only were the weaknesses flagged up, but helpful suggetions made on how to firm up these areas. I am confident that by following the recommendations, I will end up with a much better, viable script. It's important to say that there were many positives mentioned too, which is very heartening - sometimes it's all too easy to remember only the negatives. I will use the services of Industrial Scripts again and feel confident in recommending them to others.”

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Posted 10 years ago

“Excellent level of detail and professionalism. I am exceedingly happy with my report as it's opened my eyes to both the strengths and weaknesses of my work.”

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Posted 10 years ago

“This is the third time I've purchased the Coverage service. As usual, the report was delivered promptly. This time, however, it is obvious that a different reader read the script, a reader no less thorough in addressing problems that he/she perceived, but one who's perspective differed from the previous reader. Whereas I felt the initial reader was enthused and moved by the project, I felt this reader to be less supportive. However, I realize this is the reality of any creative process and I hope it will only make my story stronger.”

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Posted 10 years ago

Shipping & Delivery
On-time Delivery	Greater than 93%
Customer Service
Communication Channels	Email
Queries Resolved In	Over A Week
Customer Service	4.1 out of 5

Industrial Scripts - Screenplay Editors Reviews